Tuesday, 28 January 2014

Thriller Comparison- Miss Georgiou

Overall when making our thriller opening sequence, we included many of the typical things you would see within a thriller genre. Charlotte and I made sure that the conventions of a thriller were included and that we created suspense and tension within the thriller whilst keeping it realistic and making the audience feel like they were part of the thriller.

I believe that our thriller was successful as we researched into thrillers many times before putting together the final product and gathering ideas. This helped us to gather ideas for the thriller and by using conventions such as - suspense, tension, young innocent victim, hidden identity of the killer ; it enabled us to put together a realistic approach to a thriller yet keeping the audience engaged throughout. It was also successful as we had great feedback and we worked well and efficiently as a team in order to make this a productive project


My opening sequence contained many different features such as low-key lighting and i used this as i believed that it was one of the most important conventions to a thriller in order to make the thriller have more suspense and tension.
My opening sequence contains features such as low key lighting used through out in order to show a metaphor for how dark the plot of my opening sequence is. Also effective, tense sounds are used in order to make the audience feel up-tight and scared as they aren't aware of what's going to happen in the opening sequence. The cinematopgraphy used within my opening sequence is very conentional to thrillers such as hand held, high angle, and close up. These camera angles allows the audience to view how the characters are feeling and portrays their fear clearly, as well as emphasising the vulnerability of the characters. Therefore, due to these conventions that I have included within my opening sequence, I believe that my opening sequence is successful.

Throughout the whole opening sequence I contributed towards each element within the product but I felt that my best work can be seen in hair and make up. This is because being a female, with required expectations on how to look through pressue from societ, I am able to understand the importance of appearance and am therefore able to apply my understanding towards the characters in my opening sequence. For example, the youthful female used within my opening sequence has blonde, thick hair representing a typical convention towards thrillers. This is because it has been seen in many films, such as Hitchcock's Pyscho, Jaws, Scream 2, Saw and many more. Blonde victims are portrayed to be gullible, weak characters who lack intellegence and ultimately make a perfect victim. The female's outfit showed her character because she's wearing clothes that cover her body, which I felt would be powerful to use as it makes the audience question the females self worth and opinion on herself because she has her body covered up throughout. This relates to the audience because a lot of young girls are shy to show their figures and ultimately have low self esteem, so I was confident that by adding this into my opening sequence would gain, particularly the female audiences of the opening sequence because they would be able to relate. Therefore I felt it would be best to make sure the female character would be blonde in my opening sequence so it showed my understanding of conentions within a thriller. However, I then became creative with my second character who is played by a male. I used a slightly older character who had a sophisticated look to him to show my own unique twist on my opening sequence. Using the materials that I had to create a strong male allowed the audience to feel a sense of security and comfort, the male character is misleading to the audience because he has this strong approach to him, yet as my opening sequence goes on there is a clear show of vulnerability and therefore tricks the audience.  Another character of which I was in control of costume and make up is the killer. I was sure to dress the killer in dark clothes and masked his face in order to inheighten the sense of enigma. Having an unknown character to the audience makes a tense atmopshere and a sense of vulnerabilty is thrust upon the audience. Having a masked killer in black clothing follows the typical conventions of a thriller and therefore I wanted to include this into my group and I's opening sequence. Due to the audiences reactions to the characters who were dressed to my accord and had myself take care of their appearance, I saw a lot of positivity with regards to how approachable the characters where and how their appearance had drawn the audience in. Therefore, with regards to my creativity and understanding of my thriller opening sequence in hair, make up and costumes it shows my complex understanding of how to get the audience to enjoy the opening sequence and be drawn to the main feature of the film - the characters.




·         Which micro element, best shows your creativity and understanding of thriller conventions the most?

·         Compare your opening sequence to a successful thriller and explain how your thriller is conventional. Consider the narrative, representation of characters, sounds, editing, mise-en-scene

Audience feedback- Miss Georgiou

Audience feedback is essential when we created our thriller as we received many different feedbacks in order to help us improve and discuss what we could do to better our opening sequence.

We firstly showed our opening sequence to the audience as our target audience were ages 15-18 as er rated our film as a 15 certificate. We received feedback through many different ways eg:- screening of our production, focus groups and questionnaires. We put all of our feedback onto an A3 sheet of paper and then Charlotte and I discussed the matters and directed the feedback back into our thriller to hopefully improve it. We put the questionnaire results into charts to show what people thought of our ideas about the opening sequence. This enabled us to see their personal opinions.

The feedback would benefit our production and the industry as it helps us with our personal gain within the opening sequence. Feedback lets the industry know what went well and how the film could be improved if they added certain things into it. It would enable us to get constructive criticism from the feedback which would let us know what we could do next time in order to improve our production, this would also benefit the industry as they can also get feedback on what to improve and what the audience want in the next film.

One of the positive comments we had was good use of low key lighting used with the projecter effect. The audeince felt that this was very conventional to a thriller genre and that they believed that from this they themsleves were in our storyline and the low key lighting created suspense and tension, which made them scared for the next and upcoming scene. The projecter effect they said made the thriller more like a home film, and this is what we wanted our thriller opening scene to feel like. This is because we wanted the audience to feel like they are the killer, and by using Point Of View camera angle we achieved this and made the audience feel like they were part of the film and they said that it made it more effective as everything felt more realistic.

Another possitive comment we had was the characters and the storyline in which they were based. They felt that the charcter (killer) was very realistic and the storyline of him being in a jealous rage and wanting revenge was even more relaistic and the audience felt that they could relate to this. The young girlfriend they thought was conventional to a thriller as she looked the innocent character but infact they loved that we changed it up a bit and that they are led to believe that the young girl is infact the one who kills her current boyfriend. As the characters were around the ages of 15-18 the audience said they felt again, more relaistic features about the thriller as they were more engaged with the opening sequence due to the charcters being the same age as them.

Finally, the last positive feedback we had was our editing. The audience felt that the editing of the credits created a sense of tension and that they were intrigued to know what actors were in the film. We used the colour convention of red and white which contrasted with eachother as we wanted the red to represent the blood of the murders, and white to show the innocence and the purity of the people whose lives are taken. This made the audience think more about the actors and what could then happen in the opening sequence. 


We had  a few constructive comments that we took into consideration. One was the editing of the credits and that they were too small and fast for them to read. We then corrected the problem and made the font of our text much bigger and by making the timing of the text coming in slower, the audience then said it created tension as they got to focus on the actors (in the credits) whislt also focussing on the action on screen.

Secondly, we had another constructive comment on our thriller and this was to do with our mis-en-scene. This was the clothing we used in our thriller. At first we used a mask for the killer and we didnt believe this was realistic to a teenaged genre, and at first the audience didnt think this part was too realstic, yet they thought it was conventional to a thriller. In this sense, we changed the entire clothing of the killer, and made him wear a hooded jacket, big boots and tracksuite bottoms, as this would of been a sterotype of a typical teenaged boy. This then made the audience feel as if they could relate to the murderer and then this added effect to our thriller as they character became more relasitic.

Lastly, our finaly constructive comment was the sound. We had the same sound running throughout the entire sequence and the audience though this didnt create tension or suspense, and made it sound constant withour any dramatic twists. We then took this comment on board and we then were able to put in other sound clips which made the scene sound more dramatic, and then this made the audience feel scared to watch as we made the sound link with the events happening on screen.

We followed the aims of the brief as we made the characters realistic, we kept to the time scheduale and we kept on task throughout. We also kept to the brief as our opening sequence was two minutes long and no longer, and we made the audience feel that this was realistic and conventional to a thriller, and made the audience feel like they were in the film themselves.

Thursday, 9 January 2014

Evaluation - Miss Georgiou

In our evaluation our group decided that we actually worked really well as team . Although we lost a member of our group, Charlotte and I co-operated well together and worked very well as a team. We found that we took on bored each others ideas and decided the positives and the negatives about those particular ideas and then made them into our thriller. Charlotte is a very intelligent girl and I had a lot of fun working with her , she gave many great ideas for the storyboard and interacted with the camera when we filmed our thriller.

There were many roles me and Charlotte decided to give each other. For example my particular roles were Director and Editor. These were very big roles as I had to consider the best ways in which would help create the suspense and tension when filming and adding edits into our thriller opening scene. Charlotte was costume designer and producer in which we both decided what costumes to wear to make our thriller look more realistic for the audience. By Charlotte being producer she made the final edits and cuts to our opening scene which when then uploaded onto YouTube for our rough cut edit. We had feedback from the class whichever as very good, name there are some things we can improve on. As we lost Freddie during the course, Charlotte and I gave eachother those specific roles as they are what suited us best. Despite the roles, we helped eachother with everything and made sure that the other was comfortable doing one piece if work whilst the other focused on another. I learnt from my role that there was a lot of responsibility to take hold of. Despite the great deal of responsibility on my shoulders, I believe that I coped well and could turn to my team member to help me if I struggled with the amount of work. As a whole, Charlotte and I worked very well as a group despite the changes with Freddie. All the other groups did have the extra member so me a Charlotte sometimes struggled with the work load, but because we cooperated very well together we pulled through and had a great time working as a pair. We were very efficient and understanding of the genre on a thriller and the conventions, and took on board one another's idea, in order to make a productive thriller opening sequence.
I think that we have made a good thriller opening sequence, as we always related to the codes and conventions of a thriller. We included low key lighting which added suspense and tension throughout. We included typical female and boy victim (young teenagers) as when analysing other films we noticed that teenagers were seen to be the most vulnerable to be attacked. We also included a relatable genre for the film, which made the audience relate and more scare as it was very realistic to everyday life. Another convention we used was the weapon used to kill the victims. We used a knife as the murder weapon as we believed it was the most conventional to a thriller and the most realistic. This made the audience relate to it as when we made it scrape along the side of the kitchen it created suspense and tension.

The most typical generic conventions to a thriller would be that a young blonde girl gets innocently murdered or tortured by the killer. We have seen this happen in many films such as, Saw, Paranormal Activity, Drag me to Hell, Physco and the Human Centipede. These were all very successful thriller films as there genre was very relatable for the audience. It made you think that bad things are always going to happen, when for example in Paranormal Activity when the clip slows down and the low key lighting occurs you know you have to prepare yourself for the worse; it as us at the edge of our seat. Our thriller we compared it to Scream. This is because we have shown the murder weapon as being a knife with the hidden identity of the murderer like in Scream. The genre of the film is to scare people into thinking somebody is behind them and to warn people that wherever they may go something might happen, and this is what we had to make sure we included in our thriller.

The main characters in our film included a young teen couple who were together in the young boys home. The young teen had a previous boyfriend whom in which she ended the relationship with to be with the boy. Unfortunately, the ex boyfriend took it the wrong way and wanted his revenge, as he is a very possessive and overpowering boy he ends up convincing the girl by force to help in murdering her current boyfriend. We included the young girl as she was pretty, young and innocent and this is what we have seen throughout the entire analysis of different films. We twisted the usual story line in which we made sure the young girl wasn't murdered and that in fact she is made to killer her own boyfriend, but in our opening scene we do not actually see this and we are led to believe it is her when it could be the murderer himself. This obviously added a effect to the audience where we left them in suspense. We included the young boyfriend as we believed that there obviously had to be a victim but not necessarily a young female. He was the initial victim so that the story could be a mystery as the young girl goes missing after the murder takes place, and he is how the plot continues after the opening scene. We finally have the ex boyfriend who is the murderer. We made sure his identity is hidden as it is never revealed until the end but we made sure we see some sort of action from him in the opening scene. This added the suspense to the scene as we as the audience we cannot see the identity of the murderer so it remains a mystery which therefore intrigues the audience to continue watching the film and find out who the murderer actually is.
Gender isn't represented in a stereotypical way as we see the boy for once in the vulnerable position instead of the young brunette. This makes her look powerful as she is the one who kills her boyfriend, but vulnerable as well as she is made to by her fierce ex boyfriend.
Our characters would appeal to the audience as they are realistic. Some people could of had bad relationships which have haunted them to this day, and they could see the terrible outcomes of  sick and twisted mind corrupt another relationship. They would also appeal to the audience as they rating of our film is a 15 so the audience would be teenagers themselves and it would engage them more to see young teens like themselves on screen to make them more scared as they may think it could happen to them.

A target audience is important to consider as we need to know what things we can and cant introduce into our thriller. Without our target audience we are not able to plan and film our thriller as there could be things we are not allowed to show to for a certain age. The target audience gives us an idea of how much blood, sexual scenes, offensive language, gore etc we can put in as we are wanting to engage our audience to want to watch the film. We need to know how scary the film can be for the audience not to get bad vibes from it, they only need something that will scare them short term and not long. Our target audience is for ages 15 and above. This is because our characters are at a similar age and this will make the audience believe it is more relatable and that there is no sense of fiction what with the characters being the same age. They would be more engaged in the scenes and will be able to cope with the blood gore and frightening scenes that would occur. They are more likely to understand the storyline as well as it can be quite complicated.

Primary research was essential to our production as it helped us to analyse different films and to gather up ideas for our own thriller opening too. By doing the research we were able to see the positives and negatives to thrillers and find out what conventions are needed in a thriller create that suspense and tension it needs. We got to gather information of what mis-en scene is used and how we can portray and use that within our thriller, and how different opening titles effect the way the opening scene is conveyed. When researching we did a variety of things :
  • Analysed films
  • Carried out questionnaires
  • Narrative theory's
  • Age certificates
By analysing all these different things we were able to put together positives and negatives for thrillers and what we should and shouldn't include into them. The analysis of the thrillers were the most important as we got to see what is always used within a thriller. We found out that they always used victims especially female victims which was a convention to a thriller and they always used haunting music and low key lighting to add drama and suspense. Another primary research we did was the questionnaires we asked and filmed to the public. This gave us an idea of what the general public like to see in thrillers rather than what we expect. This was great research as we can then cater for the specific needs and ideas of our audience rather than think of something by ourselves.

We used many different technology systems and objects to help create our production. We used to create our research and evaluations of our thriller and other thrillers by using a system called Blogger. This helped us create blogs for all our analysis on different films, research, ideas for our thriller and it helped us keep track on all of our research and ideas when we needed to film. We use blogger for the research so we could jot down what we thought we had learnt when learning different things throughout this particular media course. It has helped us show our understanding of what we have learnt and also shown us how to use different systems. We also used a video camera and a tripod to help us film the thriller opening scene. We were obviously inexperienced a using all this equipment but this was another learning curve and then got to experiment with different camera angles such as high angle low angle handled etc.
We also used editing software on the Mac Computers called Final Cut Pro X, this helped us edit and fix our thriller into making something of an opening scene. We got to experiment with cropping, fading, blurs, sounds etc. For the sound we used a website call freesound.org this enabled us to type in any particular sound we wanted, download it, and import it into our thriller for where we could edit it if chosen.

We found it difficult to film high angle shots due to we could get the camera to stay still up in the air, there was also potential risk of either one of us falling and hurting ourselves if we fell off wherever we were standing to get the high angle shots in. To overcome this we only used one high angle shot in which we decided to get some help from another friend so that wherever we were standing we had some support to keep us balanced.

When editing I found out how to move footage onto each other so that one clip could play whilst the other did too. I also learnt how to move sound and footage around so that sound could be quieter when the scene is at a crucial point which would create suspense. Id say my strength when editing was the credits as I got them to go from different angles and different colours, and the feedback about the credits was very positive. A weakness of mine I think was trying to hard to make the scenes flow, this made some things go wrong and we had to start the editing again due to footage being cut out when I added things like 'blurs and fading' into the equation.

Thursday, 2 January 2014

Rough Cut - Miss Miler


A rough cut is important to consider when filming a thriller as it gives you a chance to share your work with others to gain constructive criticism from them in order to help give you more chance to improve your opening sequence. The rough cut should be similar to the final cut so that the audience can give their opinions in a fair manner. If I was to make a thriller opening, to submit my work without doing a rough cut, then the clip may not show its full potential, and show the progression we have made as a group when filming and editing our opening sequence.

Audience feedback is very important to consider when presenting our rough cut, as it gives us a chance to get an honest and un-biast opinion on our opening sequence. They can give you productive criticism to help you improve on elements that may not be working, but also tell you what parts are not as effective, so that you can improve on them, or simply make sure you keep them or keep them out of the sequence.


After presenting our rough cut and receiving feedback, my group and I created a presentation, which we showed to our class in which it allowed them to get a better understanding of our clip, so they would be able to give us some more constructive feedback. The presentation included;

  • What our group narrative was
  • How we came to a conclusion of the narrative
  • What our final narrative was
  • Our individual narratives with the positives and negatives
  • What we wanted to create. + How we think we have created it.
  • How is it conventional to a thriller genre
We then showed our class our rough cut of our thriller sequence, which we had previously exported to YouTube, allowing the option of feedback to be given through comments on the video.

When receiving feedback, we were told that we had many strengths and weaknesses. Our strengths included;


  • Good use of low key lighting - conventional
  • Good variety of shots used - high angles, low angles, eye levelled shot, handheld, etc
  • Good variety of shot distances - Close up, Extreme close up, long shot, aerial shot, etc
  • Good use of sound - builds tension/suspense.
  • Good suspense building – conventional/audience scared
  • Good use of characters – relating to the audience

Our weaknesses included;
  • Not enough credits – not enough names used e.g – music co-ordinator/screenplay
  • Same use of colour in credits – needs to be change/mixed up/diferent varieties
  • Music the same throughout – needs to have iconic changes
When thinking about how we could improve each of these weaknesses, we decided that we would make some changes. We decided to change the music when we want the scene to become more dramatic, in our case when the girl is running away from the villain, we made the music more sinister and faster to emphasise the situation and her heartbeat. We made sure the credit were more eary and were in different positions when coming onto the screen by including fades and blurs which we already of I some of the credits.
The weakness of there not being enough credits and then having the same constant colouring of them is a fair comment, simply because we had not finished/finalised all of the credits yet. It was good to show the few credits we had made as there were no comments as to the fading and blurring on/off of these credits, and so I have assumed these were effective, although it is hard to tell without them all being completed.


This feedback will help me with finalising my final thriller opening sequence, as it has given me and my group ideas as to how to improve our clip. We now have an understanding of how the audience will react and can hopefully adjust and change certain elements to help make our thriller opening sequence the most effective it can be.